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The Fun Planet

Submitted by Monkey on Fri, 2007-03-23 08:42.

Once upon a time long ago there was a planet called, "The Fun Planet." The planet was colored purple and blue. And it was a gas planet. We jump to get to places. And it had lots of "Food." I like to eat food.

The temperature on the Fun Planet is really hot. And it is kind of cold at night.

On The Fun Planet the life forms are miniature and crazy. This means the kids and adults are crazy.

The clothes are made out of cloth. They wear tank tops, shorts, and flip flops. If you don't wear the clothes and you wear pants and long sleeves instead, you will get burnt.

The activities on the Fun Planet is going to the biggest water slide in the "WORLD." Some people go every day. There is a big pool and it is 50 feet deep. There is a rope you can swing on. You can swing and let go and fall into the pool. And there is a big soccer field to play on. You can go surfing in the ocean too. The surfboard can even surf by itself.

I think you should come visit the Fun Planet. It is a lot of fun.

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Dear Monkey,

Submitted by Ashley (not verified) on Fri, 2007-03-30 10:49.

Dear Monkey,

The Fun Planet reminds me of one of my idea’s for a children’s book. The title was going to be Chocolate Land. It was about a girl that always ate chocolate. She even dreamed of chocolate! Well, one day she woke up, went into the bathroom to brush her teeth, and of course, she couldn’t see that well because she was so sleepy and didn’t notice that the sink was made out of chocolate! She went go grab the toothbrush and put chocolate toothpaste on it! Then, she stuck it in her mouth and tasted chocolate! She opened her eyes so wide, that even an owl’s eye’s could never get that big! She looked outside and there was chocolate everywhere! There was chocolate streets, poles, lamps, and even chocolate cars! She got dressed and went outside. She was soooooo happy. But, right before she was about to take a bite of her mother’s car, she woke up! It was all a dream. That reminds me of my story because your story was made up too. I like your story because you have lots of enthusiasm and you are very creative.

Sincerely,
Ashley

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