The Moon is Not Cheese

My name is Lizzy Rose Adventure. I love adventures, art, my friends and school. Every year there was an adventure for me. But this year, there was not one in sight. But, I was going on a adventure soon. Even if I didn't know it yet, I was going to the moon.

It was raining and I was bored. I mean I was so bored that I was just sitting on my bed, doing nothing. It was a weekend, they are supposed to be fun, not boring! I was just looking out my window waiting for my friend to come, when I saw a flash coming through my closet door. I went over to the door and opened it. Ding, Dong. I shut the door and went down stairs. Clump, thump, thump, clump. I opened the door. "Hello Abbie," " How are you doing today?"

"Fine, thank you, but bored." said Abbie.

"Me too," I said." "Do you know what?"

"I don't know, what do I know?" Abbie said.

"Will you quit that!" I said. "Just come up stairs."

"OK," said Abbie. Clump, clump, clump, thump, thump, thump, stomp stomp, went our feet. "Guess what I saw in my closet," I said.

"What did you see?" said Abbie. "An alien!?"

"No, I saw a flash come through the closet door." It was quiet the rest of the way up (except for our feet)clump clump stomp stomp.

When we got in my bedroom we shut the door, and went straight to the closet door. But we didn't dare open the door, because what we saw was very, very weird and half-way scary. There was a glow all around the edge of the doorway, and just like Abbie said there was an alien. "An Alien!" we screamed.

"No cheese, monster," "Moon falling down, need help," said the cheese monster.

"Then if you're a cheese monster and eat cheese all the time, then where do you get all the cheese?" said Abbie.

"From moon," said the Cheese monster. moon cheese, moon home, need help."

"Moon Cheese!" we said," No way!"

"Yes way, but it is falling down so we need Help."

"There is no way you're going to make us move from this spot" I said.

"Please, pretty please," he said.

"All right, we will come," we said.

"Yeah!" " step in the closet, please." said the monster of cheese.

"OK," we said, and went in.

He shut the closet door. It was very, very dark inside. All of the sudden the ceiling opened and we were in space!

Actually we were in space and on the moon!

"Yeah and the moon is also cheese," I said.

"The moon is cheese?!" we said together.

"Yeah," said the cheese monster."

"I can't believe this!" we said together.

"I can." said the cheese monster " Hop in my space car, and I will show you where the moon is falling." he said.

We walked (or should I say we floated) to the space car. When we got there he noticed that we were having a hard time breathing (because we weren't space Aliens)so he gave us a suit and helmet,and got into the space car. We went all the way around the moon(or should I say halfway around the moon) to get to the spot that was falling down.

"Now to my house for hot chocolate and cheese!" he said. So we all went to his house for hot chocolate and cheese.

When we got there I noticed that the house was made out of cheese so was the beds, tables, and lots of other things. Once we were done looking around we went into the kitchen to have hot chocolate when we saw Mrs. Monster cheese, we also saw what we did not see yet, a whole village of cheese monsters! We were very much amazed. We both sat down in the cheese chairs. They were actually comfortable (not like the chairs at home) then she gave us some hot chocolate and cheese. "Wow this is very good(even though it has cheese in it!)"

"Why thank you"

"Come on we need to go help the cheese monsters fix the moon."

"OK, I'm coming"

"I said that we would meet him were it needs to be fixed" I said.

"How are we going to fix the moon anyway?" Abbie asked.

"I don't know," I said. "Maybe we can take a screw driver and ... "

"That's it!" Abbie said.

"So I gave you an idea?"

"No, I gave myself an idea, with your help."(Like always.)

"Well then what is it?"

"My idea is to go home..."

"Is that all we our going to do?"

"No, we are going to get a screwdriver and nails, cheese nails." said Abbie.

"How are we going to make cheese nails?" I asked.

"Easy, said Abbie we are going to put cheese on the-em." Shake, shake, crash.

"What was that?"

"It was the moon" said Abbie "I think the moon is going to crash very soon."

"So what you,re trying to say is that we need to hurry!" I said.

"Yes, you're correct, so lets hurry!!"

"Ahhhhahhh!!!" we screamed Crash, Crash, Bang, Bang.

Little bits of cheese was falling off of the moon. We covered our heads and halfway ran and halfway floated all the way to the spot where we could dive into Lizzy's bedroom closet. We jumped and dived, we both landed on our feet (like a cat.) Lizzy and I both opened the closet and ran all the way to get the nails (or should I say cheese nails)and a hammer.

We ran all the way up the stairs and into Lizzy's closet. Now we were back on the moon. It was amazing that monster of cheese had a space car already waiting for us, so we hopped into the space car and we floated at full speed to the place were it needed to be fixed. When we got there we halfway ran and halfway floated to the spot that needed to be fixed. Bang, crash, crash, bang. The whole moon was shaking. It was if there was a terrible earthquake on earth. "Now what are we going to do?" I asked.

"We are going to drill holes in the ....well actually we are going to stuff cheese (moon cheese) in the moon for our first step," said Abbie.

"OK, Now lets get moving before the crack gets bigger." So we all started filling up the moon with moon cheese. Once we were done, we smoothed the cheese so it would blend in with the whole moon. Now all they would have to do is try to push the the crack together and nail it. They all found out that they would have to get more cheese monsters, because it was shaking very hard. So they called all of the cheese monsters.

"Cheese Monsters we need your help, so please help us!!!" we called.

Soon every monster in the village was there to help. We had to push and push and push when all of the sudden it was back together (almost.) We just had to do one more thing which was to nail the moon back in place with cheese nails. Lizzy and I both nailed the moon back in its place. It took us ten minutes, though, and it was hard!

"Thank you, thank you so very much!"

"No problem.""It was a little hard but we made it get fixed!"

"Now for a reward."

"We do not need a reward, really."

"Yes you do, and the reward is that you both get hot chocolate and cheese.

"Why thank you."

"Well you did save our home.""So here." So we took the hot chocolate & cheese and drank it. What a day.

We took the tools and headed back to our home town. We walked (or should I say floated.) We hopped back into Lizzy's closet opened the door. We were home, at last.

"You know, I still can't believe that the moon is cheese."I said.

"Yeah and I still can't believe we saved the moon." Abbie said

"Neither can I. But I'm still waiting for an adventure," I said.

"Wasn't that an adventure," said Abbie.

"I guess you're right; that was an adventure, but I want to go on another one, and very soon!"

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I like your story. I love how you put lots of talking in your stories. Keep up the good work!!

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