The Hive

My sister found the bee hive by the front door. The bees came out of the hive and she ran in the house and she told my mom about it.

At first we thought it was a really small nest but it wasn't. The bees made the hive out of like papery stuff. The hive was really big. I don't really now how they made it, but I think they took a long time to build it and everything. Well, it took a long time, anyway.

The hive was made out of like paper and it was all like swirly and stuff and I thought that was cool. When we took it all apart and stuff and cleaned it off, it looked like a honey comb.

When we took it apart we didn't want to brake it. Me and my uncle we took it apart really slow. It was really cool taking it apart but after, we felt sorry for the bees or hornets.

I was interested because I thought that it was really cool doing this. After that me and my uncle took it apart. That is how I started writing this story. I really liked this because it was time to spend with my uncle. We had to wait to do that all sumer and fall and winter for last Friday.

I like your story a lot! I

I like your story a lot! I think that's very cool how you put real live pictures in your story. Good job!

I like your story veary

I like your story very much!!! That is a really really cool picture for your story!!!!!

I think the pitures were

I think the pictures were really cool.

I like how you put real

I like how you put real picturs in your report.

I though that your story was

I though that your story was very good! I liked how you put the Bee-Hives pic's on it, it looks really cool. You should wright more true story's about thing's like this.

I really liked your story

I really liked your story T-T. It most of been really cool to take the hive apart. I thought your story was really groovy. I like how you put pictures in your story.

I like It smiley when you

I like It smiley when you said groovy and I like the comment a lot.