Shoes! Shoes! Shoes!

Anna Carol loved shoes! She had all of the shoes that were ever made! Every time the shoe store came out with a new pair of shoes guess what, she had them!!!! She thought she would always get what she wanted, until one day.
Before that one day nobody would ever say no to her because they were too afraid to say no to her. Every day she would have a new pair of shoes because she would never (when I say never I mean never ever) wear the same pair of shoes twice.

Then one day it happened. Layla Wallena did it. She was the first one to tell Anna Carol no. She told Anna she didn't want to be her science partner because Anna would always pick Layla to be her partner and never do any of the work.

"Excuse me," said Anna Carol. "You're excused," said Layla Wallena.

"Did you just say no to me?" Anna said.

"Yes, I did," said Layla.

For the first time ever Anna didn't know what to say. She felt different. Nobody had ever said no to her before; not even her parents would ever say no to her! (Now I think Anna's parents have the right to say no to her).

Soon after that day anybody would say no to her. From then on Anna Carol would have to wear the same pair of shoes twice. (Oh isn't that horrible!) just kidding!

After the day that Layla Wallena said to Anna Carol "NO!! I don't want to be your partner!,"

Anna didn't know what to say!!!
So now Anna actually has some friends!! (Wow thats a coincidence!) I still can't believe that Anna actually had some friends! But, she got the friends by being nice to people, so thats how she actually had friends.

Everybody was happy that Layla had said no to Anna because she was so spoiled that she was not a nice girl. So now Anna was nice to everybody, and everybody was nice to Anna!!!

Anna's life was so much better just because once somebody actually had said no to her. Now every once in a while somebody says no to Anna!! (I think that's all I have to say now!!!)

I like your story but I have

I like your story but I have heard another on just like it before...

I liked your story but I

I liked your story but I heard one just like it before yours!!

I like your story. Maybe In

I like your story. Maybe In your next story you can write what kind of shoes shoes shoes Anna Carol had.

Hi Bella, This is Sissy. I

Hi Bella, This is Sissy. I just wanted to say that I really like your story. It tells that when a girl is spoiled it is a very bad thing. So even if your scared to say no to somebody say it anyway because it is good for the other person. And also our story gave a lesson. Anyway I got to go now. So comment on you later. Bye!
Sincerely Sissy.