My beautiful poems.

Submitted by Frenzy on Fri, 2006-12-01 09:34. Poetry

When you're gone.
When you are gone. I am still here, right by your side whispering in your ear.

Sweet roses.
Roses are red, violets are blue. Families are sweet, and you can be too.

Don't be sad.
When everything is sad, look on the bright side and don't be mad.

When I'm old.
When I get old, I will be ill. But you will be there to make sure I'm well.

I'm always there for you.
When you are not mad.
I am glad.
When you are sad.
I will always be there
for you. When you are alone,
I am with you
every where in thin air.

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I really liked your poem.

Submitted by Babygirl on Mon, 2006-12-04 09:18.

I really liked your poem. How did you do that? Who taught you how to write like that? Will you teach me how to do that? Well I really did like it. Some people do not think that I feel like that, but that is not true.

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Dear Frenzy those poems are

Submitted by Mochacaramel on Mon, 2006-12-04 09:24.

Dear Frenzy those poems are touching I love them, Did you make them up? well if you did great job if you didn't thank for putting them on the web.

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How did you think of all

Submitted by Puffypuff on Wed, 2006-12-06 09:35.

How did you think of all those poems cause I like them so much. I wish i could be you cause you are pretty.

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That was a great poem it

Submitted by Bella on Mon, 2006-12-11 18:25.

That was a great poem it sounds like you wrote it for all of your friends.

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Thank you,and actually no

Submitted by Frenzy on Tue, 2007-01-16 09:44.

Thank you,and actually no one taught me I thought it in my heart because,some people do actually feel that way.Sometimes people feel that now there gone they can't see them any more.But i'm trying to tell them they can still see you even though you can't see them.And sometimes they really are whispering in your ear.Of coures you can't see them or hear them.But they can see you and hear you.

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