The Huge Monster

One day I walked down the street. it was a beautiful day. The birds were singing, flowers were blooming, and I was taking a walk down the street to the park. When I got to the park the birds stopped singing, the flowers started to wilt. I asked myself, "What is goig on here?" I went to the swings and sat down and started to swing, the swings were squeaky. I jumped off. I went to the sandbox instead.

"It is too quiet," I said. So I started to leave until a monster jumped out and grabbed me! I cried "Help, help , help. But before I could say any more, he covered my mouth and took off! The monster went through forests, over mountains, deserts until he got to his home.

It was the most creepiest place I ever saw. There were spider webs everywhere we went. There were ghosts everywhere, and everything was black and white and gray. But the monster was bright yellow, green, and blue. He had big fangs, and he was very hairy. I was looking at him so much that I did not notice that I was in a dungeon, and boy when I found out I screamed "Haaaaaa haaaa! I want to go home you big uggly monster.

He started to cry. I think I hurt his feelings, I said in my head.

So I said, "I'm sorry. Did I hurt your feelings?

Yes you did." he sobbed.

"All I wanted was a freind."

"Well why didn't you tell me? I would have been your friend.

"You would?"

"Yes." So I stayed at his house for a while but I got lonely so I said to the monster, "I am lonely and I miss my parents. Can I go home?

Yes you have been a good friend.

So he took me home. I said "good by," and I went home!

I like your story and how

I like your story and how it's about a huge monster. This is the first story I have read so far that has a monster in it. I think you should write another story about a monster but that does different things. Great job!

The story that you made was

The story that you made was great!! I like how youu explained what was going on and made your people talk too!!! Keep up the good work at your stories!!!!

I think that your story was

I think that your story was really cool. It was kind of like the story I wrote The Monster In the lake. I think you should write another story like this one.