A Candy World

Once there was a gingerbread man. His name was Gumdrop. He was very small. He was nine centimeters tall, and three centimeters wide.

Gumdrop got hungry, so he was going to the store to get some candy. On his way he met a gingerbread woman. She was on her way to the store too!! So the gingerbread man and the woman walked to the store together. She was getting a Twix bar. Gumdrop got a Twix bar, too. Then she said "Hi I'm Candy. What's your name??"

"I'm Gumdrop." said Gumdrop.

Candy had red gumdrops on her, and Gumdrop had green ones. Her gumdrops were very sparkly and pretty!! Then Candy's friend came. Her name was Sparkle. She had pink gumdrops. They were pretty!! Then Candy, Gumdrop and Sparkle went to a restaurant. The name of the restaurant was Debb's. They only served milk and juice and also water! Gumdrop ordered milk. Sparkle order apple juice, and Candy ordered grape juice. Everything they served was a dollar and fifty cents each.

In the neighborhoods there were only 3 houses in a block. Candy, Sparkle and Gumdrop moved to a different neighborhood so they all lived by each other!! Now they all live in a gingerbread house!!

Today Gumdrop got 2 puppies, and he named them Rachael and Jasmine. They were both girls. They were twins!!! They were only five months old. They were so cute!! But they ate a hole in his house by the ground! So Gumdrop had to go to the store to patch the hole. On his way back from the store there was a lady giving away 18 puppies for free!! So Gumdrop got them all. They were all very cute and they all got along with his other two!

Now Gumdrop had 20 puppies and that was an exhausted day for Gumdrop. So when he got home he patched the hole and went straight to bed!!

good story

I really like your story. You should write a second one about gumdrop.

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I like how you wrote a story about a gumdrop. It was very interesting to read about. You sould write a second story about a gumdrop.