Fashion Freak

Submitted by Tibby on Tue, 2006-01-24 10:20. Fiction

Once there was a fashion freak named Sara Wallmen. She was 14 years old. She went to a mall every Friday! She loved to get new clothes every Friday!! Sara Wallmen never ever wore the some clothes twice. So she had to get seven new outfits and P.J every Friday.

Sara Wallmen always got what she wanted when she wanted it. { If you ask me I say Sara Wallmen is a spoiled little 14 year old!!} Even when Sara was 2 years old she still got what she wanted when she wanted it!! Like for example when her mother brought her to the Super Market she saw this really cute teddy bear and she asked for it and her mother said "NO!" But she still got it somehow!!!

Sara Wallmen loved new clothes!! After Sara Wallmen wore her new clothes for a day she didn't want them so she put them in her mom's room. But Sara Wallmen didn't know something that her mom did know. Sara Wallmen thought her mom donated them to someplace but she didn't! She brought them back to the store so she could keep getting new clothes for her!! So it was like Sara Wallmen got to wear new clothes for free! Sara Wallmen was always happy because she all ways got what she wanted.

But one day she asked for a leather hat and her mother said, "NO!!" That was the first time ever she didn't get what she wanted!! She got VERY MAD!!! And she started screaming. Her mom said you have to start acting like a human! So she started acting like a human by not asking for EVERYTHING she wanted. She would save up her money from baby-sitting and that's how she mostly got what she wanted. (But just sometimes when she was VERY lucky she could still get some stuff from her mother!) But now EVERYONE in Sara's school likes her and everyone is friends!! (And every one LIKES that!!!!)

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I like this story.

Submitted by Bigsister on Wed, 2006-01-25 11:14.

I like this story a lot. I think you did a great job!

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Thank you for thinking my

Submitted by Tibby on Wed, 2006-02-08 09:51.

Thank you for thinking my story was good!!

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I really liked your story!!!

Submitted by Lala on Fri, 2006-02-17 09:58.

I really liked your story!!! I liked the part when Sara Wallmen learned
her lesson. She shouldn't have every single pair of clothes. I thought your story was fantastic!!!! I think you should make another called Another Fashion Freak!

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Thank you for likeing my

Submitted by Tibby on Mon, 2006-02-20 10:43.

Thank you for likeing my story! I am writing Another Fashion Freak! How did you know???

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I really like your story! It

Submitted by Sissy on Mon, 2006-03-06 10:12.

I really like your story! It was great. You were born to be a writer. You should keep up the good work!

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I think you had a great

Submitted by Bella on Sun, 2006-03-12 09:24.

I think you had a great story!!! It really inspired me!! I made a story kind of like that!

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I tootaly licked your

Submitted by Jimmy (not verified) on Sun, 2006-04-02 15:36.

I tootaly licked your storie. It was so asome. I licked the part wher Sara Wallmen's mom toold her that see haad too start ackting like a humam. You story was awsome!!!

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I liked your story alot! I

Submitted by Amanda (not verified) on Sun, 2006-04-02 15:40.

I liked your story alot! I liked your story because you explained how Sara Wallmen always got what she wanted!! Great Story!!!

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I think that its funny how

Submitted by Froggy on Mon, 2006-05-08 09:26.

I think that its funny how when she was done with the clothes her Mom took them back. It is a very good story, I'm glad I could read it.

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