Mochacaramel's Raven posts
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Tue, 2007-05-08 08:43.
Personal Narrative Ahhhh!!!Splash!!! The rollercoaster hits water - everyone gets wet. I'm going to tell you about my trip at Disneyland.
I was there in front of Splash Mountain with my best friend, Dominique. We had to wait in a long line. I could hear screaming and yelling and the sound of water splashes.
When it was our turn we got on. The seats were wet from the water that splashed everywhere. We buckled our seatbelts and the ride started to move, the ride was starting.
We went up very slowly, then into circles....Ahhh, straight down we went plunging into the water. Crashing down came water, getting on everyone. Then we went back up to the other side. That side was even worst. It was long and dark were we were going. Then all the sudden I found myself and Dominique in a tunnel with water in it. We go very wet but we dried up going down a big, Giant, HUMUNGUS slide, Ahhhhh! Into a big puddle of water it was great and the ride was over.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Tue, 2007-05-08 08:22.
Report Bzzz! Have you heard the beeswax about bees? Honeybees are buzz buzz buzzing away from hives.
Bees are disappearing and that is bad because if they disappear, food we eat won't grow, and and animals we eat will die.
Scientists think it could be from a disease, parasites, virus, bacteria, or pesticides.
I think that bees are very important and we need them. Bees carry pollen, some pollen drops on a stigma of a flower. When that happens seeds fall and develope new plants. If plants don't grow what will we eat? Some animals eat grass. What if they have nothing to eat?
That is why be
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Tue, 2007-04-24 08:58.
commonplace Beyoncé Knowles was born September 4,1981 in Houston,Texas.
She sings R’B,is a songwriter, record producer, actress, dancer, fashion designer,model, and a philanthrops.
Beyoncé started singing in 1990 and acting in 2001 and still are. She was in FIGHTING TEMTATIONS,DREAMGIRLS,and more.
She has sung with Destiny:s child, Jay-Z, Solange Knowles, Kelly Rowland, and more. She sung BEATUIFUL LIAR, DE JAVU, KITTY KAT, and even more.
If you want to meet her you can take a song and make your own music video. If you win you will get tickets and backstage passes to meet her.Or you can go to her address 550 Madison Ave., 2416 New YOrk 10022 US.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Thu, 2007-04-12 07:56.
Fiction "All right people I have some great news, so listen up. Chris Brown, Beyoncé, Caira, Justin Temberlake, Jojo, and more are all coming to Florida from California and they are all forming a competetion." said Sanica, "But wait there is more. Anyone who wants to audition to sing with them can. Meet me downtown after school."
So me, Sanica, sat in class next to DJ. DJ was tall and has braids in his hair. Savannah likes dinosaurs, F.Y.I she is weird. Joesph is a goth and he never talks. Kelsea is very sneaky. Corey loves to go to Alaska and race. Those are my friends.
I go to Chaffey Collage. I live in Miami, Florida. My friends and I like to go downtown to the studio.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Fri, 2007-03-23 08:40.
Report Yesterday morning March 22, 2007, reporters Robinson and Eric came. They were from the Daily News Miner. They came to talk about our website, tellraven.us.
They asked questions about our website like how do AlphaSmarts 3000's work. We asked questions, too. Like what got him interested in writing. Questions like those.
When we were done we got to work. Students were asked questions. They answered and keeped talking. I got my picture taken and I told Eric about my story about helping people. After that, they took more pictures and left. That's my reporter story.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Thu, 2007-03-22 08:55.
Personal Narrative One day, the sun shined in my room and I woke up. I turn my head and tried to sleep again, but it didn't work. So I got up and went down stairs to eat some cereal.
The house was trashed. It looked like someone robbed and then tee-peed our house. There was a whole bunch of trash on the floor. There was napkins and drawing paper everywhere. Loads of dishes were in the sink and dirty clothes were thrown everywhere. It was probably my mom, dad, and baby brother. They are always eating late at night.
I decided to clean up everything. I cleaned up the floor. I cleaned dishes. My hands got itchy from the soap. I also cleaned up the clothes, too. I felt like I was the maid and I had to do everything.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Fri, 2007-03-09 09:32.
Fiction Once there were two girls. One was Sanica and one was Diana. They were best friends. Sanica was new in Alaska and as soon as she got here she saw her first black ghost. It was horrible. She said she was seeing things.
Then she went to a school called Denali. The school was close to the woods. The woods were always covered with fog. Sanica wondered why. Then she meet Diana. So that summer Sanica and Diana found a den. It had a tunnel in it. They crawled through it.
They found a book that had codes. The book was old and ancient. It had gold on it. They crawled deeper. They found a stone that had the same codes that was on the book.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Thu, 2007-03-08 08:56.
Personal Narrative I went to the Science Fair and saw a lot of science projects some were about space, crystals, volcanoes, rockets, catapults and more. All of them were great. They had lots of detail. My favorite was about growing crystals. I learn that salt grows crystal the fastest and the most. I liked the science fair.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Wed, 2007-03-07 09:02.
Personal Narrative I am psychic and I can prove it. One time I was watching That's so Raven. Then I stopped and had a vision. So I stopped and told my brother not to go down the stairs so he wouldn't fall. So he disobeyed me and he walked down stairs and he tripped. A few weeks later I took the That So Raven psychic test and it turns out I am psychic.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Tue, 2007-03-06 09:37.
Commentary The only reason I am weird is because I like to sing and I always am singing. Even right now. Singing keeps me motivated and spiritual. But that is still not the reason I am weird. It's is about the tones and tunes I make. Here is some more details below.
My favorite singer: Beyoncé
My favorite CD by her: B'D
My favorite song by her: Deja Vu
That is why am weird.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Thu, 2007-03-01 09:11.
Fiction Planet X-R is a place to shop. You can buy whatever you want. Only kids and adults can go there. And school is only two days for five seconds, and parents don't work.
This planet is made of crystals. The crystals shine light. It is also 34,500,600,000,000,000,000,000,000 ft. across the planet.
The temperature is 75 degrees. That means it's always warm. The planet's heat allows it to make it's own heat and light. The planet heats up from the inside out
The life form is Inderos. They are furry round aliens. There are also very tiny. They are very smart, too. They are brown, white, or black. They have little arms and legs. Their horns are small. When they think their horns collect lighting.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Thu, 2007-02-22 09:29.
Fiction On planet X-R there is a school named Kool, and in room 212 the teacher is Mr. Moon. There are 28 kids in the class including Cookie. There are 9 computers, a white board, sink, cubbies, two book selves.
This is a fourth grade classroom. We do a lot of writing and math. We have a packet of homework every Monday.
You are lucky because the science fair is coming up and Cookie is going to be in it. She said she may make a volcano.
Well I have to leave now so I can tell you more, bye.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Fri, 2007-02-16 14:38.
Report Size: 4,500,600 ft.
Temperature: 75 degrees C
Life form: Inderos
Clothes: Nothing
Activities: Shopping
There is something you must know, in the future there will be a explosion 798,866,900,000,000,000 miles away. Little dust ball will become small furry Inderos. Inderos are little alien fuzz balls that shop........a lot. They shop everyday. No working. Just school on weekends.
My favorite is Cookie. Cookie is a little Indero. She shops all the time. She has a lot of clothes and they all are cute. She also has a lot toys. She has a lot of future technology, like Robot 7.000 with one wizard.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Fri, 2007-02-09 09:30.
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Submitted by Mochacaramel on Thu, 2007-02-08 09:40.
Fiction Planet Sweets is made of candy, and for school they learn about candy and eat candy and ice cream. It is like Willy Wonka's Chocolate factory. The people are even made of candy. But the people are noneatable. You can never get cavities either.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Thu, 2007-02-08 09:37.
Commentary Valentine's Day is one of my favorite times of the year. Last year for Valentines Day in my class we made heart shaped bags and students would buy cards and candy and put them in them. Then when we were done passing them out we ate the candy and looked at our cards.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Fri, 2007-01-26 09:13.
Commentary Martin Luther King's dream is about how he would like colored skinned people and uncolored skinned people could be together. But is his dream still alive? I have a poster about it.
I think that people shouldn't be racist because everyone is the same, like every one has feelings. I am glad there are different rules now, like everyone is allowed to eat at resturaunts.
I hope this horrible thing never happens again.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Tue, 2007-01-23 09:16.
Personal Narrative Shakira:
I wouldn't be able to describe her. Shakira is so talented. She's beautiful too. She has a lot of great ideas. We are the closest of friends. There are a whole bunch of things we have in common. Shakira likes singing, she is a great singer. When she grows up she wants to be a famous gymnast.
Me:
I like to sing a lot. I sing all the time. I'm strange because when I sing out loud or in my head I do better work like now. Also I like to make up songs too.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Tue, 2007-01-16 09:31.
Personal Narrative Tuesday I went to the dentist right after school. When I got there I had to wait in a waiting room. My dentist was Dr.Wheeler. Then I sat in the chair and I got a shot in my cheek. It hurt. Then my whole left side of me got numb. Then he put a cap over my tooth. Then I got to go to the treasure chest. I got a water game that looked like a cell phone for my baby brother.
Submitted by Mochacaramel on Wed, 2006-12-20 14:41.
Personal Narrative Today I had An orchestra party I had candy and watched 4 Bugs Bunny videos. There was cookies, candy, drinks, and my mom brought doughnuts. I had a good time there.
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