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L and The Magic Bottle


By Joey - Posted on 18 January 2008

One day I was walking down to the beach and I found a glowing bottle. When I touched the bottle there was a voice, and the voice said, "I am L, and I will grant you three wishes, what will be your first wish?"

I thought of nothing so I just randomly said, "I wish for 100 more wishes."

L said, "Your wish is my command."

After that I took the bottle home and didn't show it to my family. I went to my room and set it on my desk. I thought is L really a genie? It felt great having to make wishes. Then I fell asleep.

The next day L asked me what will be my second wish, but I didn't think of one yet. Finally I said, "I wish I had a puppy." Then out of nowhere a little puppy popped out, the puppy was so cute.

L went back in the bottle. All day I played with my new puppy, then my brother came home. He asked, "Where did you get that puppy?"

I said nothing.

When my mom and dad came home they saw the puppy and said nothing. I asked them if I could keep the small puppy. They said yes.

While I was busy feeding the puppy my brother sneaked into my room and saw the magic bottle without me knowing. As he was coming out of my room he had a Ds, with some games, a Ps3, a brand new computer, and a flat screen TV.

I got mad because he went into my room and found out about L. I told him not to tell mom and dad and he said, "Fine."

After that he was playing his Ps3 while I was wishing for my own Ds. L said, "You have only 95 more wishes left."

I was thinking of a name for the puppy and then I thought of it. Chaos.

During school I showed my friends the magic bottle and they said, "A genie. What.Ever."

I knew they wouldn't believe me but I wanted to show that I was not lying. L came out of the bottle and said, "What do you need?"

Then I said, "I wish for one million dollars."

BAM right there was a sack of one million dollars and my friends were like, wow. Then a whole group of kids followed me home asking me to make a wish for them, and I was like NO. My brother asked if he could get another wish and I said, "Fine." He wished for his own puppy to play with.

Making wishes aren't that bad is it? I thought. Next day it was my birthday. I went into my room and L popped out of nowhere. I asked if I could have all of the Bleach books. L said, "Your wish is my command."

All day I was reading Bleach downstairs. I got bored and went up to my room and started to play my computer. L came out of his bottle and kept asking what was I doing. I said, " I'm playing this game called World of Warcraft, it is a Rpg game."

Then my puppy Chaos started barking at the mirror. L suddenly started saying weird things and I told Chaos to shush, and L stopped saying stuff. I wondered why that happened. I asked L and he said, " don't like to hear dogs bark and if that happens again, I might go away."

I locked Chaos outside so she won't bother L again.

One day while I was in school, I left L in my room and thought no one would touch the bottle but I was wrong. One of my classmates was absent and he sneaked into my house to get L. When I got home I didn't see L or the Bottle. Man, I knew someone would sneak in just to get L and waste all my wishes.

The next day the person who stole L came to school with the bottle. Lots of people followed him around the school asking him if they could have a wish. I was so mad that I wanted to go over to him and hit him. The boy's name was Ryan. Ryan was one of the people that followed me home asking for a wish. He was probably upset and stole L.

This time I followed Ryan home and he knew I wanted L back. Ryan got annoyed that I was following him so he started to run. I finally caught up to him and he said, " I'll give him back to you if you let me have one more wish."

I said, " Fine."

I didn't know what he wished for but he was happy. L came out of the bottle and said, " You only have 3 more wishes." I was like how in the world would Ryan waste so much wishes. When I got home I placed L in a place, so no one would find him.

Next day I had to make a wish that L was gone and all the wishes were still here. I asked L if I could do that and he said, "Yeah, but it would take 3 of the wishes.

Then L did the spell and he wasn't gone or the bottle. But something happened. I was knocked out and when I got up everything was back to normal and there was all the things I wished for and L was gone. I thought it was all a dream but it wasn't because this time my brother found a bottle at the beach.

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I really like your story. I write long stories like that too. You should make some "movies" out of some of your posts. If you want to see one you should go to my blog and look for one that has a (v) or a video next to it.