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Fall
Fall, what a beautiful time. the the water freezes, and the leaves change from green to yellow to brown. The rainbow hills and the cloudy sky will soon fade away to white, nothing but white. Nothing but the white sky. Winter is nothing but white. But soon will be the end of the white winter.
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Good job! Fall is one of my favorite seasons. You used the word "white" a lot. And don't forget to capitalize your words at the start of a sentence.